This would be stronger if it included interviews with some of the friends we see. As is, there's no real narrative arc.To the viewer, it appears as a random collection of photos. Captions would help that. The accompanying text would be stronger if it had more specific details -- along the lines of getting thrown out of the hockey game.
This would be stronger if it included interviews with some of the friends we see. As is, there's no real narrative arc.To the viewer, it appears as a random collection of photos. Captions would help that. The accompanying text would be stronger if it had more specific details -- along the lines of getting thrown out of the hockey game.
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